Thursday, August 9, 2012

Oad to the i phone

- Dear my lovely I Phone -


        When I saw you on the internet
            I sweared to get you
          But we can't meet because we have
      a wall named
            'expensive' and 'disagree'
     I'm thinking, you and I playing under the tree
            I want you so much what ever how, someday
    there will be chance to meet you. Then  Promise for we two will met next time ...
                                       
                                                      LOVE,

                                                   KANG HYUN (Gary)

3 comments:

  1. I think it's short really..-- but choosing i phone is good

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  2. It was short, but the idea was great!

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  3. This is a good start but too short, also write in paragraphs not sentences on separate lines.

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