- Dear my lovely I Phone -
When I saw you on the internet
I sweared to get you
But we can't meet because we have
a wall named
'expensive' and 'disagree'
I'm thinking, you and I playing under the tree
I want you so much what ever how, someday
there will be chance to meet you. Then Promise for we two will met next time ...
LOVE,
KANG HYUN (Gary)
I think it's short really..-- but choosing i phone is good
ReplyDeleteIt was short, but the idea was great!
ReplyDeleteThis is a good start but too short, also write in paragraphs not sentences on separate lines.
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